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Blog: Valentina Perez Topic: The new president

I'm happy, because the new president is Sebastian Piñera I wish or i hope that he will be better and trustful than Bachelet.I know that is difficult your work, but I knew that did'nt imposible. I will be support in everything and I hope the best in your work. (:

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Blog: Artur Zepeda Topic: The new president

The new president of Chile is Sebastian Piñera, he is a bussinesman, he wants to get a good president. But just as he wanted to become president, a replic of the 27 February earthquake stroke Santiago... something tells me that God does not want to be president Piñera.

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Blog:Francisco Bravo Topic: The New York Times

This journal is located in the city of new york. in this newspaper spoke on various topics such as technological advances, also speaks of the economic status of the country in this case the United States. This newspaper caught my attention because it also is well known worldwide. You like me because I imforma of what is happening in North America and the world.

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Blog : Aniffe Sein Topic:If I had superpowers I would...

If I had super powers like me to have the following super powers:
"Incredible Jumps
"Being athletic
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-Elastica
-Strength
and post supposed to be able to fly.

The powers would use them to help people if you are in trouble, but I do not like to be a superhero and that depended on my city.
I would like to use the powers as fun.

But closely have super powers and be a magician or sorceress prefer a thousand times I can obtner haci porqe magic all the powers I like most other things you can do to be like the charmed (TV)

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- Elasticity I can obtein magic

Blog: Sebastian Ferraz Topic:

The reconstruccion of chile is very well as every cauntry brethren as they are help for we and like says thanks for all and says that would we do just same but we also us help the most affected
and i helping to affected because feed that they do just same and hopefully dont pass the same in many more years but i have hope that all go good

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we also help us ...